If you think its good at DHS, then it would knock you socks off at DLP (actually DS for Disney Studios).
The one downside that I have with it is that its not shown enough each day. Maybe one more show per day would be better! I also do not want to see it spell death for Indiana Jones down the sidewalk. Between Indy and LMA, DHS has the best Stunt Show Combo of any theme park that I have seen!
I agree with Anthony that it would benefit from 2 shows per day or, at least, an extra performance at weekends or high season.
Despite this I still think that Waterworld is the best in Class for current stunt shows.
" benefit from MORE THAN 2 shows per day "
I also have to point out that I'm not a big fan of DHS having two stunt shows. I feel as though that one is enough. Would much prefer to see Indy replaced with its' namesake ride from Disneyland.
As to pacing, keep in mind that these are real stunts with real safety protocols. Is the script a bit contrived? Yes, but they have to fill the time somehow while the next scene is rigged.
I like the fact that so much of the show prep takes place in front of the audience. They have a great cast who manages to make it look incredibly easy.